The Box Writing

For Writing W7-9 we are starting our story with

I wasn’t sure what was in the box,

We are working on sentence structure and vocabulary. This is what I wrote.

I wasn’t sure what was in the box, but I knew it was all about the ugly virus. I told Hussain to open the box because he is the one who started the virus. As he opened it everyone was scared and frightened. Everyone froze in a split second! A shining-luminous light started to come out of the box. A voice of a mystical fairy started to rise above the box. Then it started singing with a delightfully voice. Beams of gleaming light started to extend from the fairy and going around the world to heal the ugly virus. Everyone felt healthy and alive! So the world became a safer place.