FOA Week Revision

The Box Writing

For Writing W7-9 we are starting our story with

I wasn’t sure what was in the box,

We are working on sentence structure and vocabulary. This is what I wrote.

I wasn’t sure what was in the box, but I knew it was all about the ugly virus. I told Hussain to open the box because he is the one who started the virus. As he opened it everyone was scared and frightened. Everyone froze in a split second! A shining-luminous light started to come out of the box. A voice of a mystical fairy started to rise above the box. Then it started singing with a delightfully voice. Beams of gleaming light started to extend from the fairy and going around the world to heal the ugly virus. Everyone felt healthy and alive! So the world became a safer place.

Ideas and values - Johnny and Baylie

Johnny's Animation

Bale's animation.

Drama 16/11/2016

Today in drama we are working on musical theater.

Here are some information to learn more about musical theater.

Here are 3 kinds of musical theater,

Opera - Opera is a musical theater, Opera is when actors sing their lines and no dialogue.

Mime - Mime is when a mimer cannot talk but they can only use hand/body language to communicate.

Musicals - Musicals are when there are dialogues and have singing music.

Examples of muscial theater

Opera - Venus and Adonis - Partenope

Musicals - Hairspray - High School Musical

Mimes - 

Writing T4W3/4

In writing, we are currently working of punctuation and vocabulabulary.

This is a picture of the kakariki birds we saw at Lochmara Lodge.

This is what I wrote.

There I was staring straight at a red crowned kakariki bird, the first time I ever seen one. It has a mossy-green feathered body, a lengthy green tail and has a red feathered head. All I could hear was birds chirping like a morning with birds singing.

It smelt like a hippo who took a massive poop. It tasted like poop-flavoured air which tasted disgusting. Sadly I didn’t get to touch any of the birds because they were all far away from the group. I felt so cramped because of the space we had to share with the group.