[10Eng] Class Essay Blogging

The Class Essay

Introduction

Too expensive, too uncomfortable and too unsuitable. The Hornby High School uniform should be changed. This is because it costs too much, it is unbearably irritating to wear, and is unsuitable for the various seasons.

SEXY Paragraphs

[S] Some Hornby families can not afford the school uniform

[E] For example, some caregivers find the $130 jacket too excessive.

[X] This is because they need the money for other necessities such as food, power, and rent. This is a terrible situation for substantially sized families.

[Y] Do we want our students to be starving, cold or homeless, just for the school uniform?

[S] Not only is it too expensive, but it is extremely uncomfortable.

[E] For instance, the socks, jersey, and shirts are all confining and itchy.

[X] This distracts from learning. We want our students ready to learn - always.

[Y] Wool it ever stop?

[S] As well as the uniform being too expensive and comfortable, it is inappropriate for certain weather conditions.
[E] We see this when students are wearing non-regulation jackets or jerseys to be warm when its cold and wet.

[X] “The skirts are far too cold on a wildly wet and windy winter’s day,” said Kirsty, a year 10 student.

[Y] Jaymee -another year 10 student- commented that they could end up dying from hypothermia if the uniform does not change.

Conclusion

Change the school uniform now! Why? Because it costs too much, it is horrible and intolerable to wear, and it is totally ill-equipped for New Zealand’s moody Mother Nature. A better quality uniform will result in better quality learning.