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Thursday, 17 May 2018

Gaming is making too many young people unhealthy. [10Eng]

Gaming, a fun but addictive way to entertain yourself. Gaming helps entertain young people in their free time. And sometimes, most games let you play strategically and help open your mind. Gaming can even help young kids have a feeling of enjoyment and practice winning a match which can help increase their positivity around people (and maybe bragging rights). But there are some cons about gaming like being addicted to games such as Fortnite or PUBG. Sometimes when you're playing, you don't realize how long you have played. Like you have been playing for 6 hours straight and you think you have only played an hour. Sometimes gaming can make young people less social and stay home and play games all day. And the worst one of all, if you play online you can easily get cyberbullied online. Which happens to be the biggest threat online so far. So I honestly think that you should let young people play every now and then to let them enjoy what they are doing and have some spare time. But not too long.


2 comments:

  1. great werk Johnny Li

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    1. Yes indeed, great work! I really like how you finished with a short sharp sentence :) Would it be beneficial for me to teach you how to incorporate more techniques into your writing, over the next few weeks?

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